Blah blah make protagonist more active blah blah blah
Why do I have such a problem with passive protagonists and lack of consequences? I’ve written enough shit to figure out that this is my biggest problem, yet every time I tell myself “THIS TIME I’M GONNA FIX IT” I…still…don’t.
Heeeelp me, this is such a deeply ingrained tendency of mine, what the fuck can I do to fix it